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Re: new evil is born
The plot sounds good, although to put it in a nutshell you need far more description, and a lot better grammar. Put in periods at the ends of sentences, CAPITALIZE ...
Mar 8, 2007 -
Re: Smoke
*sigh* Damn you, Altria. I , fyi, have nothing to do with them in particular, just... damn them. Also, I liked it. Really good! The last line was pretty powerful ...
Mar 6, 2007 -
Re: The Sun Bird
AWESOME POEM! COOL! :elephant: :elephant: :D :D
Mar 2, 2007 -
Re: Bubble Picture (Part 4 up)
Something I noticed, which I don't have time to point out all the errors but they're there. "'What?' Asked Bettina." is incorrect, "'What?' asked Bettina." is the correct form. Since ...
Mar 1, 2007 -
Re: A Thin Layer of Latex
Probably. I can't find much fault, but that's most likely cause I'm preoccupied with writing my own work. Altogether I'd give it a 9/10, 1 point away because I found ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: The Ballad of John Henry's Hammer
Wow. Cool. I can't really find any fault in this, though I'm sure others will, ;) but all I can find to say is that some of the rhymes didn't ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: Sweet Home Alabama
A guidance counselor once asked me what I was. I think he may have been trying to find out what my religion is, but I didn’t take it that way. ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter & Inheritance- Opinions Wanted!!
1. Harry 2. Lord Voldemort, he has more... finesse. :D 3. Definitely Paolini, actually. (I feel like a betrayer... :() 4: Over all, Harry Potter, except today I feel more ...
Feb 27, 2007